I like the site format better like this, but i think that the baby blue chat backround should be changed (I'm not knockin kingdra) and that the opening messgae should be a little more formal. -reading message on another window- I.E.
Caries is spelled carys
-pretty much whole second sentence- it's kind of confusingly worded
third sentence, verb tense changes halfway through
write out the you instead of u
capitalize all sentence beginnings
The DragonsDen is an online community that primarily focuses on Pokemon but also offers content on other games. Our site includes a thriving forum, a chatbox, and even an actual Pokemon school to teach members about battling over Wifi. We provide extensive in-depth information about the Pokemon games, from breeding information and egg moves to Youtube battles and walkthroughs created by our members. In addition, we have our very own full wifi battling leagues in both 4th and 5th gens. And for the battlers looking to truly test their skills, we offer region-specific battles with our region masters or tiered battles with our battle frontier. To be a part of this today, be sure to register and contact an admin. Enjoy your time at the DragonsDen!
I really like the message on the homepage of the site, and if you were to tweak it up a little so it looks more professional I think it could be a great first impression!